The magic of the night
When I look back
In hindsight
Was more romantic then
Wonder, wonder when
I'll feel it again
Love the Night
Love the Dark
It is magic
Shadows stark
Against the glow
Of a Summer Moon
Hear the cry
of a far away loon
Come back oh come back
Sweetly
Greet you at the door
Oh, Magic, More...
Dear Lola,
ReplyDeleteI dont know why, but really yours this poem is very very close to my heart.I eagerly want that
hindsight magic to come back and really want to see shadows stark against the glow of summer moon and hearing the cry of a far away loon.I missed this magic too much.
when I had read your first poem, i think that I write better than you.But this poem has completely changed my view.What i am writing is nothing,it is just about my pain and that in a very very crude way.Any reader doesnt find any relation with my poem.But your poem is awesome,fanatastic.When a reader feels that the this poem belongs to his pain too,then that is actually a real poem.
Even the paragraphs that I have written are not close to my heart than yours this poem is.
I like this poem too too much.
I have written here what I feel after reading your poem.Please please write more more and more.I am waiting!